Maybe a subconscious special someone. :)
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This was surprisingly fluent! You really capture a melancholy sadness too. I like how it progresses overall, except for a couple places, first...
Yet the eyes of mine can't refrain
The tears falling down my cheeks
...and...
As once again
I cry If only it were so
That I could tell you again
...where the words seem to jump, and the structures a bit longer/richer in syllables than the rest. But overall very nice. Wonder who this was written to...
JME10135
idk i didnt think of anyone special when i wrote it i guess it could be about anyone