The sound of rain
Sends me to you
I wrote a letter once
It came from the sky
To the dewdrops of roses
Till it fell apart in your hands
The music they bring
The droplets of rain
Makes me smile
A bittersweet smile
Wanting to see you
One last time
Where are you?
What are you doing now?
Will you come back?
I hope you will
I miss you
I love you
Till the rain stops one more time
Yet the eyes of mine can't refrain
The tears falling down my cheeks
As I weep and sigh
And imagine that our goodbye
Would have never been
Yet for now I'll listen
To the fall of rain
As once again
I cry If only it were so
That I could tell you again
How much I love you
Cyberdevil
This was surprisingly fluent! You really capture a melancholy sadness too. I like how it progresses overall, except for a couple places, first...
Yet the eyes of mine can't refrain
The tears falling down my cheeks
...and...
As once again
I cry If only it were so
That I could tell you again
...where the words seem to jump, and the structures a bit longer/richer in syllables than the rest. But overall very nice. Wonder who this was written to...
JME10135
idk i didnt think of anyone special when i wrote it i guess it could be about anyone